It seemed an apt theme for a Balassi Strophe. A wha', Gay? A Hungarian rhyme form, that goes like this -
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at least, according to Kerry on Toads on her Sunday mini-challenge.x. x. x. x. x. a
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Paper planes
The crowd’s collective roar
made the paper planes soar,
some crashing into the stand,
others reaching the pitch
and landing smoothly, which
elicited a big hand.
How they circled and soared,
our long-held dreams on board
before coming in to land!
Defying all the odds,
we sit up with the gods
and sing loud that old refrain
of Olé, Olé, Olés,
pre-empting summer days
in Poland or the Ukraine.
The Irish spirit sings,
borne on the fragile wings
of each tiny paper plane.
Bravo! (And a round of applause HERE)
ReplyDeleteYou have folded up the aspirations of the footie fan so neatly within this form. I really love the last 3 lines. Ole!
yes, cheers!
ReplyDeletei like how you started with the paper airplanes in the first stanza, and brought us back there in the last one.
ReplyDeleteSo...is this the thing with bowlers and wickets, or the thing with headers and hooligans? I can never remember...
ReplyDeleteOn the other hand, we are headed for a different kind of football insanity in Canada.
ReplyDeleteThere is such a thing as Canadian football, very similar to American football, and the final playoff game is underway even as I speak. Next week there's apt to be a riot in my home city of Vancouver, BC, which is hosting the championship game.
I don't know whether to sigh or swear.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
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Love this! And hooray for the qualification.
ReplyDeleteFun to read, even knowing nothing about the game--its about loving the hometeam and the sport, and that's universal.
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