tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post722643718489995419..comments2024-02-14T08:21:35.629+00:00Comments on The stammering poet: Standing on the footpath as the Poetry Bus departsPeter Gouldinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-45281682842443977972010-06-01T10:44:07.092+01:002010-06-01T10:44:07.092+01:00I think you were onto something there! At the same...I think you were onto something there! At the same time, I almost didn't get on the bus this week because I had such difficulty with this one.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-23419320326715802432010-05-31T15:51:26.009+01:002010-05-31T15:51:26.009+01:00Up with fish! Let's not forget that one in the...Up with fish! Let's not forget that one in the aquarium.Kat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-87323182451696713112010-05-31T12:09:04.435+01:002010-05-31T12:09:04.435+01:00Pete, this is as good as mine! I couldn't do ...Pete, this is as good as mine! I couldn't do it either, I think because I left myself with the need for a verb in the half-sentence. Have noticed that if you went with an "and" to add onto maybe things flowed more.<br />And Rachel's right, more fish pun poems! More fish!Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-86438479877359233742010-05-31T12:02:16.155+01:002010-05-31T12:02:16.155+01:00it was a hard one to fin'ish alright! Don'...it was a hard one to fin'ish alright! Don't f'eel too bad... (sorry.. )Batteson.Indhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10846214578565824955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-25581020699969552502010-05-31T11:39:11.035+01:002010-05-31T11:39:11.035+01:00Plus I love rhyming but no way I could do it every...Plus I love rhyming but no way I could do it every poem! It's worth learning to enjoy doing both I think.<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-5565195315989164632010-05-31T11:38:01.255+01:002010-05-31T11:38:01.255+01:00And what is wrong with a fish pun poem? I like it....And what is wrong with a fish pun poem? I like it...more fish! More fish!<br />xRachel Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11803852725693518924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-63877039062893205752010-05-31T08:28:46.834+01:002010-05-31T08:28:46.834+01:00No, I've had a few attempts but I think that t...No, I've had a few attempts but I think that the prompt is not good for us rhymers, unless you deliberately choose second halves that rhyme.<br />Niamh, you came up with a stunner - I'm envious.<br />Kat - hate them sneaky migraines!Peter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-16686788931175400192010-05-31T03:04:54.360+01:002010-05-31T03:04:54.360+01:00I'm having a tough time as well. I've got...I'm having a tough time as well. I've got some notes on my laptop and few lines I like, but so far, nothing I'd be anxious to post. A sneaky migraine isn't helping. (Or is it perhaps the result?)<br />Love that "herring" aid line!<br /><br />KatKat Mortensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6689448175317552618.post-16508873891062783132010-05-30T19:37:50.182+01:002010-05-30T19:37:50.182+01:00I found it tough as well, not sure but think I hav...I found it tough as well, not sure but think I have one after several attempts that will hopefully be a poem by the deadline - ie tomorrow. Anyway 6000 words and two poems is pretty super going for 3 days work, busy busy!!Niamh Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519443787482685320noreply@blogger.com